Also I've noticed that you haven't included some details from previous posts.
Mainly things that have been directed at you, for example Ralyx introducing himself, Che'anni reintroducing herself, Amy introducing herself and you should pay special notice to her since she could be the one to teach Nomad how to control his beast to certain extents. The lack of personal feelings, adjective, and other stuff makes the post seemed rushed, or if I dare say it boring and bland. You should find a way to express your character that makes him/her seem alive, and not just a background setting. I do Admit, sometimes I even find days where I can not post, or rush through a post just to get a story going if people are waiting on me but it is necessary to find an hour or two where you can take the time to write a detailed walk-through of your character, the background, and other characters backgrounds, If you do feel like you need help finding this way of expressing your character we are here, often the easiest way is imagine yourself as the character, imagine what they would do, and what you would do. Your characters are your creation, which means at least they are apart of you, sometimes it is fun to Rp characters that are the complete opposite of you, end of the day they are apart of your feelings.
Anyways I don't think I can get a post up today, although I will try. School is pushing us with homework and assessments already and we've only really started school over here. I'll try to get that kingdom card up later for your Rp Jo'rak, also will try getting a post up later if I have time.
This wasn't meant to be antagonizing to you colonel but more as a way for you to open your eyes to your characters feelings. I am sorry if this is in anyway disrespectful to you or hurts you in anyway or form am it isn't meant to do that to you, Your character has great potential and by the looks of it we all agree that Nomad can be an epic character, if you are up to the challenge.