Hi Namira and everyone elseI'm happy to be Ula, Kumori or a Silver Hand, whichever you prefer if you still need people and decide to take me on, I completely understand if not.
Name: Alia
Race: Imperial, from the town of Skingrad, Cyrodiil
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Appearance: 5'8" in height, tall and slim. Pretty face with green eyes and light skin. Long brown hair, worn in a braid down to her waist. Has scar across left side of lip from a brawl with a khajiit, some years ago.
Personality: Happy, trusting, optimistic, compassionate and caring. Speaks freely and kindly to everyone, but will not be taken for a ride. If she senses lies or deceit, her mood will turn dangerous.
Class: Archer for long range combat, dual daggers for close range. Practices Restoration magic and Alchemy in her spare time.
Occupation: Traveler and Sellsword
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From what I know of you personally, I know that you know how to write and that you know your TES Lore at least to some degree. Basically, you are a gamer girl, and you know what you are talking about.
Your words are brief, and to the point, which is good if you were trying to make notes for a school study guide. (lol XD) And one thing also good about your card is that by your word choice and small details it shows to me that you have a strong sense of an idea of who your character is going to be. It's not a bad character card, and I have also learned that you are still new to roleplaying--so I am only saying the things I am because I am trying to bring you further into strength as a literary role-player.
The first thing I want you to do, like the others, is to put more thought into your card. Like your words give a good idea of the basic fundamentals to your character, I don't just want to see your character for who they are on the outside, but for also who they are on the inside. Get personal with it, make your have a bit more length because paragraphs aren't your enemies but your friends!
Also, I would like for you to add a bio about them. Sure, we have a physical idea and emotional understanding of who they are, but, who are they really? Get into your character's head and remember, when you are roleplaying--you are doing literally just that! You are "Role-Playing!"
Last but not least, please form your character to reflect the faction that YOU want them to join. You are too vague, and I want that to be your decision not mine. If you want to be Ula, there is a spot open for it, but you will have to change physical attributes such as your eyecolor and your beast form color to have black fur, as well as, the mark of the Ula under your right foot.
Get back to me--and I do hope I didn't scare you away!
should i edit my character card and try to add more detail and background? i tried to keep it relatively simple so i could go either way with whichever faction i joined, but if i can be ula then i can rewrite to make the necessary changes thanks again for the advice, i'll update it and let you know xx
can't wait to start writing with all you guys xx
ok will do
I accept, and I thank you for understanding that the things I have said were only to help you along instead of hinder you.You are apart of the Ula now, welcome to the pack! This card is so much better, however, the only thing you need to do is change her eyes from blue to silver because the Kumori are the ones with the ice blue eyes and the Ula has silver eyes.
sorry about the eyes! i'll edit that now xxthankyou rek
Name: Servina
Race: Bosmer
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Personality: Servina very respectable and will follow after those who are in charge of her. She is very kind hearted considering who she is, but she has a rather nasty side which is rarely seen.
Appearance:
She has sharp yellow eyes which are fast which means she can see things quickly and even the smallest deatails she can see with ease. She is slim and she is 6'9 foot tall. Servina is quite strong with a bit of a bulk in her muscles.
Weapons: She thinks of her mind as a kind of weapon as she is quite intelligent and knows what she is doing with great cunning. Her bow also comes in handy which was made by her out of ebony and has an enchantment of fire, and the arrows are drenched in poison which on contact gives the victim a long and painful death.
Werewolf traits: She has enhanced strength, intelligence, enhanced eye sight and great sense of hearing and smell.
Armor: She doesn't have much armor, she usually wears tavern clothes and in times of need she wears rangers clothes and very rarely she wears ancient nord armor.
Bio: Her life began in Skyrim suprisingly as her family moved there after a hard life in Valenwood as they were treated badly being poor and not having anything of any value. Servina was born on Dragon Bridge ( the actual Bridge) as they were on their way to Solitude before her mother before Servina was born, but it was too late and Servinas mother gave birth to Servina.
Servina, in her early days from about the age of 10 to 18 she was a serving girl at the Winking Skeever. She had eventually got fead up of serving people, being treated like a second class citizen and she had also been attacked many times and also some men tried to seduce her, so she ran away leaving her family, but she felt such guilt when she remembered her family and she felt sick to her stomach at the thought that she might never see them again as she didn't know her way back to Solitude and she couldn't bring herself to going there after abandoning them.
Servina was then transformed into a Kumori and joined a pack where she learnt how to hunt well and how to kill. Servina was transformed and joined the Kumori pack when she about 27 Servina respected her elders and those who ruled over her, she thinks her life had improved, but she still worries about her family, every waking hour in fact wishing she had brought them with her, but it was too late now she would probably be thought dead.
Servina had tried finding her way back to Solitude, but she never had any look even though she had better senses. Servina loved her family and she wanted to see them even if it was just one more time, but her mother was old and her sisters and brothers would have probably moved on to new things, Servina didn't evne know if anyone cared she was gone.
Servina now had a new type of family and she loved them all like she did her real family. Servina was not one of the strongest in her pack, but she was still treated well and sometimes she thinks the wolf life is better than her elf life.
I hope this is better I put a lot of work into this
I am proud of you!
ahh thanks rek and yes I am proud and I'm happy you pushed me to my full ability!I can tell you did a great job! I bet you are proud of it, huh?
ahh thanks rek and yes I am proud and I'm happy you pushed me to my full ability!
yeah I should be able to
oh gosh forgot I was doing a woman silly me
in rl?
