Google, I see you have made the effort to change the post. It's better than before
You're in!
Minstrel: The generation refers mostly to period of time spent Rping here. (Basically my way of tracking who's most likely to go inactive, and who will stay on for like, forever. ) But everybody's opinion is of worth, and I agree with what you say.
To Exploding cat, there is a problem. Despite what you have done to avoid making your character overpowered, that is what he is. I appreciate the tuning of destructions spells down to expert level, but that coupled with alchemy, smithing, enchanting and usage of any weapon, not to mention lack of pain in certain areas, special ring and decapitation skill, your character has jumped a whole notch higher than ANY of us.
For example, We each deal with a certain skill. Melee the bow, Geminus the sword and Derath with spells. We don't go beyond that area. Your character seems a total mix of everything, able to create potions and cast spells while barraging your enemy with blows. Remember; in this RP, it's not how strong you are. It's how well we work in a team. All of us are trying to not be any stronger than a classic level 20 in the Skyrim world.
Even my mage character, Geel, does not excel in so many areas as yours. Perhaps if you would like to tune down, you could bring down the abilities? For example, though Geel specializes in destruction, he is only able to do fire spells and I have never made him do anything above fireball so far, not to mention he is heavily handicapped due to being clumsy with both blade and bow.
Other characters are also far more tuned down. Perhaps you could try being under a specific category? A blacksmith? A poisoner? A two handed warrior? A agile assassin? A skilled enchanter? Don't try to be all of them at once.
However, you have decent writing skills, so once you tone down that will be great.
@ Hermaeus: I also noticed something about your character. He seems to have weapons suddenly pop up from nowhere. I know that in-game, you can carry like 10 sets of steel armor and a dozen swords. However, it does seem rather odd in game. First you wear a full set of glass armor, then you proceed to don a shield (most likely glass?). Following that, you continue by carrying a greatsword, along with a hefty blessed axe. Perhaps it is possible here, but try not to add on any weapons.
