OOC [18+] Kings of Fire

[EpicVakarian]

It'd be wonderful if you could get up the IC before you went to school tomorrow...

 

[Blitzz]

I'm afraid that wont be possible, as much as I'd love to do so. This will be my number one priority tomorrow though.


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[AndgerTheNord]

CC:
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GENERAL

Name: Aldor Stormblade
Race: Nord
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Laterality: Right Handed
Sexuality: Hetrosexual
Religion: Nordic Patheon
Birthday: 1st of Frostfall
Birthsign: The Warrior
Height: 6'4
Weight: 195
Dialogue Color:This
Marital Status: Now Single

APPEARANCE

Hair: Red-Brown
Eyes: Pale Blue
Face: Pale White
Facial Hair:none
Build: Muscular and tall
Tattoos/Paint: Gray war paint, similar to Hakon One-Eye
Scars:
Character Image:none

PERSONALITY

Positive Traits: Mostly polite, respects all races, a great warrior
Negative Traits: Stubborn, rude to stormcloaks
Likes: Mead, Smithing, magic
Dislikes: Burns, bandits, rude people in general
Loves: seeing acts of kindness to mer and beast folks
Hates: Thalmor
Fears: Hagravens
Habits: removing and patting the top of his helmet
Hobbies: Smithing,

EQUIPMENT

Armor:Customized Ancient Nord Armor, with the chest piece having a dragon head design (similar to the shield of Ysgramor), and the helmet being the same design as Yngol's Helm and a steel shield
Weapons: Hunting Bow and Steel Arrows, Nord Hero Swors, Steel dagger, a steel sword he keeps strapped to his back as a secondary weapon
Magic:
Other Gear: a few assorted rations and potions

BACKSTORY

Childhood: On the First of Frostfall, a boy was born to the mage Eriria Twice-LIved and the warrior Harkon Stormblade. This couple was well known for always helping the persecuted beast folk and mer, despite the ridicule and persecution. For they believed that Skyrim was a beautiful land and all should be allowed to prosper and enjoy the natural beauty it offers. Sadly they left Skyrim to avoid the hard life their child would have to live, so they went to Hammerfell. As Aldor grew up he asked his parents why they chose Hammerfell and not Skyrim. He was told Ulfric was against their beliefs so they moved to Hammerfell. Aldor's father knowing of the many threats in Hammerfell, trained him with the sword and shield at an early age.

Early Teens: When Aldor was 13 he left, traveling to Skyrim, armed with nothing but his Family Sword. After a year of travel he made to River Wood weak, bloody and starving. Aldor refusing help, he crawled to Whiterun collapsing at the front gates.

Late Teens: When Andger turned 16 he received a package from Hammerfell. HIs father's ancient nord armor. Aldor then started going on hunting trips outside of the hold bringing back rabbits and deer.

Adulthood: When Aldor turned 27 he heard that the Civil War had ended and Windhelm was a city of profit. Aldor packed his gear and made his way to Windhelm, and started a reputation as a fierce warrior. Aldor spent the next 9 years making a name for himself as a vicious sellsword. When he heard of the assassination attempt, Aldor realized without Ulfric Skyrim will fall.

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[Seanu Reaves]

Oooh.... I spy... a good looking RP

 

[Mighty Pecan Pie]

Oooh.... I spy... a good looking RP

You should totally join

 

[T. Rakinson]

Andger, I'm not the leader of this RP, but this character looks to be in violation of rule 1 (no OP characters). Its mostly the shouts, but the Enchanted blade, Ebony bow and arrows and series of adept-tier spells (particulary the destruction spells) all combine to make a character that is rather over the top. Was this based off of an in-game character by chance?
Also, why would he join a group (mercernary or not) hired to fight for Ulfric if he opposes the mans views so openly?

 

[Blitzz]

Thanks T for doing my job for me while I sleep, appreciate it

What T said is mostly correct. You may not like Ulfric very much but the fact is that you're working to save him in this one. And I'd prefer if you could tone down the spells a bit, and mastering that many shouts in such a short period of time is simply unfeasible. To top it off the weapons are a tad... Specialist, I guess? I don't know that a sellsword would be touting ebony and ancient nord weapons.

I can't accept this CC I'm afraid, but I don't want to turn you away because I know that you are a talented and imaginative writer, so I'd be happy to look at a revised CC if you wish to reapply.


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[AndgerTheNord]

Got it no shouts, I will switch unenchant the blade, and the bow and steel arrows will switch to everyones favorite hunting bow. And the Ulfric thing I change that around,

 

[Blitzz]

Thanks, appreciate it.

 

[Blitzz]

http://skyrimforum.com/sf/threads/kings-of-fire.69791/

There you go guys, a nice, open-ended introduction to the RP. Post intros ASAP, please

 

[EpicVakarian]

Sweet I'll try and get a post up now.

 

[EpicVakarian]

Unsure how to make Selena introduce herself though. Obviously she wouldn't just go forward and know they were looking for people, but... :/

 

[Blitzz]

Watch out for Throgrim, he's on the prowl...

 

[EpicVakarian]

What I took from that is Throgrim approaches Selena with a, uh... proposition, Selena impresses him, he recruits her? Is that what you were getting at?

 

[Blitzz]

Well actually when I posted that I hadn't seen your post about not knowing what to do but if you want to do that then sure, why not :')

 

[Mighty Pecan Pie]

I forgot yesterday that today is my stepmom's birthday. So I might or might not finish the CC. I see you want to hurry with the introduction, but I do need some time to not rush things. I hope you guys understand..

 

[Blitzz]

I forgot yesterday that today is my stepmom's birthday. So I might or might not finish the CC. I see you want to hurry with the introduction, but I do need some time to not rush things. I hope you guys understand..

Not a problem nyo

 

[EpicVakarian]

Blitzz, if I'm to do my intro in that way, I might have to do a little bit of scripting of Throgrim, just to get him to come up to Selena. Is that okay by you?

 

[Blitzz]

Script him as you need for your intro but remember that he's quite the charmer when you do your dialogue

 

[EpicVakarian]

Kay, will do. Starting to work on my intro now.