Templar of Talos
Bane of Elves and Vampires
Hey all, this is the first peice of fan fiction I've posted on these forums. Hope you like it.
Comments and constructive criticism welcome.
Part 1... Heart of Thunder
Sváfnir Thunder-Forged slowly stepped down the stairway leading into the dark, dank catacombs. Sword and Shield in their respective hands, his bow and quiver of iron cored arrows strapped to his back. He wore Iron on his hands, feet and head, Banded-Iron on his chest and legs. He looked every bit the Nord adventurer he would read about as a child. He sniffed the air, it was fouled with the scent of era-old rotting flesh and bone. He had explored many old Nord ruins and was used to the smell now. The first one, Bleak Falls Barrow, when he first stepped into the Draugr infested deep, the smell made him vomit digested venison and mead.
His ears and eyes were open, the darkend ruins, lit only by small specs of fire from the torches on the wall, were as cold as the snow of the north.
"NNNNNAAARRRRGGGGHHH" he heard... Draugr!
He readied his sword, 'Sváfnir's Fury' he had named the blade on it's forging. He spent twelve long hours forging and perfecting his blade, all his rage, sadness, hope, love, happiness went into the steel and iron blend of the weapon. To him, it wasn't just his weapon, it was his friend, a brother even. He had slain a great many creatures and people with the sword. Trolls, Sabre Cats, Spriggans, and a dragon. At the Western Watchtower in Whiterun Hold, alongside a Dark Elf and her brother Nord soldiers. One of them suggested he was 'Dragonborn' after the beast fell. the scales and flesh just seemed to burn off the giant beast, and the energy was sucked right into him. A guardsman told him how the Dragonborn could absord the souls of slain dragons. At first he thought the guardsman was talking nonsense, but when he heard the call 'DOVAHKIIN' from the Throat of the World, the highest mountain in Skyrim, he wasn't sure if it was nonsense at all. Whiterun's Jarl, Bulgruff the Greater. A good man who seemed to care for his people, told him it was the Greybeards summoning him and that he sould travel to High Hrothgar at once, at the peak of the Throat of the World. Sváfnir had been travelling for a day and a half. It was early morning, and he found an old ruin on the way, and he needed all the money he could lay his hands on, so what better way to earn some coin and practise his sword and archery skills than looting an old ruin.
He heard footsteps, whatever it was was getting closer, untill he could see it. A Draugr, an old rotting corpse, carrying what looked like an aincient battleaxe came lumbering towards him. It stopped, raised the axe above his head and rasped somthing in the old language. Sváfnir raised his Banded-Iron shield.
"Come and get it, rot-face!" he snarled at the walking dead.
The corpse advanced on brittle legs, and began it's swing, Sváfnir braced his left arm and the age-old axe clattered against the newer shield. the impact jarred Sváfnir's bones for a tiny second, and the Nord countered with a fore-swing with his sword, it cut deep enough to open the Draugr's belly. The corpse looked down as dried organs and dust poured out of the leathery wound, it seemed to laugh. But it didn't notice Sváfnir's follow up attack when the living Nord thrust the sword straight through the front of the Draugr's throat, on the blade's withdrawal, it severed the corpse's head from the rest of the body. Sváfnir watched the head roll down steps as the body slumped back and slid down after it.
"And to think, he could have been one of my own ancestors" he said to himself with a small chuckle.
Sváfnir pressed on, deeper into the ruins. He saw a couple of small burial urns sitting on a nearby shelf, he checked the corpse shelfs nearby, only one body there, a skeleton stripped of all flesh. He picked up one of the ornate containers, shaking it. It was empty. He picked up the other one, shaking it, it rattled. He took the lid off and poured the contents into his hand. Five gold coins and a golden ring with a ruby red jewl
"Ahh, this'll be worth somthing to that intolerable Breton trader" he said to himself, speaking of Bellathor in Whiterun, who he found to be inhumourous and sometimes sarcastic, mentioning selling his relatives or something.
He placed the coin in his coin purse and the ring in a small pouch strapped to his armour before pressing on further.
He headed down a corridor which twisted and turned before reaching a large chamber. Peering out, he saw spiders webs hanging off of every statue and ledge. Sváfnir shook his head. He hated Frostbite Spiders. As a child he was attacked by one whilst he was playing in a nearby forest near his home. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him. Luckilly his mother, Sigrys, killed the monster with a single arrow. His mother was a master hunter.
He reached for his own bow, shouldering his shield and sheathing his sword. He nocked an arrow and crouch walked into the chamber. He found himself on a ledge in a circle shaped chamber, a spiral walkway led to the lower level, and started it's descent on the opposite side. His tactical mind calculated that if there were any spiders in here with him, they would be on the lower level, and would have to make their way from the other side of the room before they could attack him. he would just have to watch for their poison spit. He creeped forward to the edge of the ledge and peered down. Two Frostbite spiders, one small one and a slightly larger one, and they hadn't seen him yet. He aimed his bow and drew the arrow, aiming for the bigger one's head. He took a silent, deep breath, held it, and released his drawing fingers as he exhaled. He nailed the bigger spider, the smaller one began it's ascent up the spiral ramp. Sváfnir nocked another arrow and drew, he aimed slightly in front of the spider's path 'Always lead your targets when they move' he remembered his mother saying to him when he learned how to shoot. He released and again, nailed the smaller spider. it shuddered before dying. He looked upwards and winked at the ceiling, hoping his mother would see it from Sovrngarde. He felt her wink back at him in his heart. he smiled and made his way to the other side, peering down to see if he missed any stragglers. he didn't. As he passed the smaller dead spider he kicked it out of his path. He remembered somthing his father had told him 'Never step over the corpse of a Spider. It's bad luck' when he was a boy.
He reached the lower level, there were egg sacs and a chest. He headed over to the chest. He tried to open it, it was locked. He racked his bow onto the hooks on his quiver, and reached into another leather pouch, producing a couple of lockpicks. He inserted them into the lock, he fiddled them about for a while until he heard a click. He carefully rotated the lock until it unlocked fully. He smirked and opened the chest. He counted forty five gold coins, a couple of Garnets, seven steel arrows, a set of mage's robes and a hood and a vicious, green metal dagger, Orcish by the looks of it. he looked at the dagger further, it seemed to glow with a purpleish hue.
"By Ysmir! A soul stealer" he whispered.
He didn't know much about magic, but he knew the basics, how different enchanted weapons and armour had different coloured hues to them depending on the type of enchantment used. If he had found this ten years ago, he would have dropped the dagger immeidetly and prayed to Talos, begging for forgiveness for touching such a foul weapon. But in the light of the current situation, Talos wouldn't begrudge him the coin a mage would pay for this dagger. So he put the items into a sack he wore at his hip.
He pressed on...
To Be Continued
Comments and constructive criticism welcome.
Part 1... Heart of Thunder
Sváfnir Thunder-Forged slowly stepped down the stairway leading into the dark, dank catacombs. Sword and Shield in their respective hands, his bow and quiver of iron cored arrows strapped to his back. He wore Iron on his hands, feet and head, Banded-Iron on his chest and legs. He looked every bit the Nord adventurer he would read about as a child. He sniffed the air, it was fouled with the scent of era-old rotting flesh and bone. He had explored many old Nord ruins and was used to the smell now. The first one, Bleak Falls Barrow, when he first stepped into the Draugr infested deep, the smell made him vomit digested venison and mead.
His ears and eyes were open, the darkend ruins, lit only by small specs of fire from the torches on the wall, were as cold as the snow of the north.
"NNNNNAAARRRRGGGGHHH" he heard... Draugr!
He readied his sword, 'Sváfnir's Fury' he had named the blade on it's forging. He spent twelve long hours forging and perfecting his blade, all his rage, sadness, hope, love, happiness went into the steel and iron blend of the weapon. To him, it wasn't just his weapon, it was his friend, a brother even. He had slain a great many creatures and people with the sword. Trolls, Sabre Cats, Spriggans, and a dragon. At the Western Watchtower in Whiterun Hold, alongside a Dark Elf and her brother Nord soldiers. One of them suggested he was 'Dragonborn' after the beast fell. the scales and flesh just seemed to burn off the giant beast, and the energy was sucked right into him. A guardsman told him how the Dragonborn could absord the souls of slain dragons. At first he thought the guardsman was talking nonsense, but when he heard the call 'DOVAHKIIN' from the Throat of the World, the highest mountain in Skyrim, he wasn't sure if it was nonsense at all. Whiterun's Jarl, Bulgruff the Greater. A good man who seemed to care for his people, told him it was the Greybeards summoning him and that he sould travel to High Hrothgar at once, at the peak of the Throat of the World. Sváfnir had been travelling for a day and a half. It was early morning, and he found an old ruin on the way, and he needed all the money he could lay his hands on, so what better way to earn some coin and practise his sword and archery skills than looting an old ruin.
He heard footsteps, whatever it was was getting closer, untill he could see it. A Draugr, an old rotting corpse, carrying what looked like an aincient battleaxe came lumbering towards him. It stopped, raised the axe above his head and rasped somthing in the old language. Sváfnir raised his Banded-Iron shield.
"Come and get it, rot-face!" he snarled at the walking dead.
The corpse advanced on brittle legs, and began it's swing, Sváfnir braced his left arm and the age-old axe clattered against the newer shield. the impact jarred Sváfnir's bones for a tiny second, and the Nord countered with a fore-swing with his sword, it cut deep enough to open the Draugr's belly. The corpse looked down as dried organs and dust poured out of the leathery wound, it seemed to laugh. But it didn't notice Sváfnir's follow up attack when the living Nord thrust the sword straight through the front of the Draugr's throat, on the blade's withdrawal, it severed the corpse's head from the rest of the body. Sváfnir watched the head roll down steps as the body slumped back and slid down after it.
"And to think, he could have been one of my own ancestors" he said to himself with a small chuckle.
Sváfnir pressed on, deeper into the ruins. He saw a couple of small burial urns sitting on a nearby shelf, he checked the corpse shelfs nearby, only one body there, a skeleton stripped of all flesh. He picked up one of the ornate containers, shaking it. It was empty. He picked up the other one, shaking it, it rattled. He took the lid off and poured the contents into his hand. Five gold coins and a golden ring with a ruby red jewl
"Ahh, this'll be worth somthing to that intolerable Breton trader" he said to himself, speaking of Bellathor in Whiterun, who he found to be inhumourous and sometimes sarcastic, mentioning selling his relatives or something.
He placed the coin in his coin purse and the ring in a small pouch strapped to his armour before pressing on further.
He headed down a corridor which twisted and turned before reaching a large chamber. Peering out, he saw spiders webs hanging off of every statue and ledge. Sváfnir shook his head. He hated Frostbite Spiders. As a child he was attacked by one whilst he was playing in a nearby forest near his home. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him. Luckilly his mother, Sigrys, killed the monster with a single arrow. His mother was a master hunter.
He reached for his own bow, shouldering his shield and sheathing his sword. He nocked an arrow and crouch walked into the chamber. He found himself on a ledge in a circle shaped chamber, a spiral walkway led to the lower level, and started it's descent on the opposite side. His tactical mind calculated that if there were any spiders in here with him, they would be on the lower level, and would have to make their way from the other side of the room before they could attack him. he would just have to watch for their poison spit. He creeped forward to the edge of the ledge and peered down. Two Frostbite spiders, one small one and a slightly larger one, and they hadn't seen him yet. He aimed his bow and drew the arrow, aiming for the bigger one's head. He took a silent, deep breath, held it, and released his drawing fingers as he exhaled. He nailed the bigger spider, the smaller one began it's ascent up the spiral ramp. Sváfnir nocked another arrow and drew, he aimed slightly in front of the spider's path 'Always lead your targets when they move' he remembered his mother saying to him when he learned how to shoot. He released and again, nailed the smaller spider. it shuddered before dying. He looked upwards and winked at the ceiling, hoping his mother would see it from Sovrngarde. He felt her wink back at him in his heart. he smiled and made his way to the other side, peering down to see if he missed any stragglers. he didn't. As he passed the smaller dead spider he kicked it out of his path. He remembered somthing his father had told him 'Never step over the corpse of a Spider. It's bad luck' when he was a boy.
He reached the lower level, there were egg sacs and a chest. He headed over to the chest. He tried to open it, it was locked. He racked his bow onto the hooks on his quiver, and reached into another leather pouch, producing a couple of lockpicks. He inserted them into the lock, he fiddled them about for a while until he heard a click. He carefully rotated the lock until it unlocked fully. He smirked and opened the chest. He counted forty five gold coins, a couple of Garnets, seven steel arrows, a set of mage's robes and a hood and a vicious, green metal dagger, Orcish by the looks of it. he looked at the dagger further, it seemed to glow with a purpleish hue.
"By Ysmir! A soul stealer" he whispered.
He didn't know much about magic, but he knew the basics, how different enchanted weapons and armour had different coloured hues to them depending on the type of enchantment used. If he had found this ten years ago, he would have dropped the dagger immeidetly and prayed to Talos, begging for forgiveness for touching such a foul weapon. But in the light of the current situation, Talos wouldn't begrudge him the coin a mage would pay for this dagger. So he put the items into a sack he wore at his hip.
He pressed on...
To Be Continued