Maybe. First off, does Baroth have a proper motive for bumping into us, or simply because the story demands it? I'd like to be able to justify the events of the story. I skipped to the ending part that had you bump into us, so I will have to read the rest when I have more time.Damn, I saw Blackdoom's post right after i posted my intro. Should i edit in something else instead?
You might want to edit it to include details from Blackdoom's post, or simply edit it out until Blackdoom comes back to coordinate it with you.