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OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.
This is actually a backstory for my current character, who is a Snow Elf (by the virtue of mods).

Ammeanas remembered only fragments of his childhood in Skyrim; His mother preparing healing mixtures for his ill grandparents; watching his artisan father carve a memorial; seeing his elder brothers training in the courtyard of their house with spears, swords and bows. And what bows! They were beautiful, laminated and engraved affairs which, for all their beauty, could drive an arrow deep into a mammoth's hide. That was before the war, of course... before the panicked retreat from the burning city, before the last stand on the island of Solstheim. Before the Moesring.

He remembered that much more clearly. Remembered the chaos of the battle, the fury of the Atmoran forces, and how they cut down his friends and family around him. The Snow Prince's personal guard of pikemen and Elite Vampires could do little in the face of the human assault, but they fought until the end. The Snow Prince himself was almost untouchable, plunging his spear deep into the bodies of the enemy, freezing whole waves of them at once with his ice magic. The battle looked like it would turn in their favour, but suddenly a sword came scything out from nowhere, slipping through his protective armor of ice and mammoth ivory and burying itself deep in his ribcage.

A little girl had felled the mighty warrior out of sorrow for her slain mother. The retreat turned into a rout, then a slaughter; those who made it out sought shelter among the Dwemer, invoking ancient alliances. Ammeanas followed at first, for what other choice did he have? The Dwemer promised to give them safe harbor and help them in their quest for vengeance. However, the weeks turned into months, and months to years. Eventually, the Dwemer announced a grand banquet for all of the survivors of the Moesring, and everyone was happy to attend.

The feast was magnificent; whole mammoths turning over firepits, rich and colourful subterranean vegetation, but as the toast commenced, Ammeanas noticed the smell of the Mzardak fungus. He recalled his mother telling him as a boy, "Never eat this if you want to keep your sight, for while it tastes pleasant, it creates an unshakable habit. Not only that, but the blindness it causes becomes hereditary. Remember that, dear boy, and remember it well."

Ammeanas pretended to drink the spiked toast, and decided to observe what would happen to his fellows. Sure enough, they demanded more the next morning, and every morning thereafter, until one day they all woke with fused eyelids and no sight. In the inevitable tumult that followed, he snuck out of the city and hid in an abandoned shack in the woods aboveground.

Time passed. Ammeanas survived on wild game, shooting hawks and rabbits with a crude longbow and cooking them cautiously over a small fire, careful not to attract attentjon from the dwemer patrols. One day, he was wandering the wilds looking for his next meal, when he was ambushed and arrested by a small troop of soldiers. They brought him to the fabled city of Falzhardum Din for interrogation and eventual execution. In his absence, the oppressed, blinded Snow Elves had rebelled against their overlords, and were now considered enemies.

The interrogation proved fruitless - how could he have known anything after an exile of hundreds of years? - and thus an execution was scheduled. There was an air of general celebration that day in the depths of the city, for the war effort against the Chimer was going well, and Chief Tonal Architect Kagrenac was getting ready to summon the gods themselves using the power of the Heart of Lorkhan. The Lord of Falzhardum Din stood on a podium in front of a massive crowd and declared, "We have beat back the Falmer upstarts. We are driving the Chimer into the ground. Is there anything we cannot do?"

He then promptly vanished. As a matter of fact, so did every other Deep Elf in Skyrim. Ammeanas, now alone in the city but for the skeevers and spiders, took the opportunity to try and locate his kin, but in the hundreds of years since he had left, they had degenerated into brutish beasts, and attacked him as soon as he approached. Now an old, broken mer, he hid in an abandoned alchemy lab, seeking solace among the familiar alchemical reagents.

There, he noticed something odd; a bright red Soreyalia plant that produced a high keening sound as opposed to the regular gentle whine. As taught by his mother, he ingested the plant and attempted to observe the symptoms. He felt an unexpected boost of energy and vitality that made him feel young again. Turning to a mirror, he saw with wonder that his wrinkles had vanished and his skin regained the coating of fine ice powder that Falmer possesed in early adulthood.

Thus began his new existence, creating potions of youth and brooding over the collapse of his people. He spent most of his days stewing in misery and hatred, hatred for the Dwemer, hatred for their constructs, and above all, hatred for the Atmorans. Whenever an adventurer descended to his home, he would capture them, question them ruthlessly on the world above, then send them out into the wilderness of what he learned was now called Blackreach.

Eventually, he caught a rumour; a rumour of a civil war between the descendants of the Atmorans and an empire which controlled the region. He also heard of a faction of militant mer called the Thalmor, who would stop at nothing to see the worship of the human god Talos outlawed and utterly destroyed. Skyrim was riven by strife and conflict, and his hated enemies were weak and besieged by a force far greater than them. The time for revenge had come.
 
This is actually a backstory for my current character, who is a Snow Elf (by the virtue of mods).

Ammeanas remembered only fragments of his childhood in Skyrim; His mother preparing healing mixtures for his ill grandparents; watching his artisan father carve a memorial; seeing his elder brothers training in the courtyard of their house with spears, swords and bows. And what bows! They were beautiful, laminated and engraved affairs which, for all their beauty, could drive an arrow deep into a mammoth's hide. That was before the war, of course... before the panicked retreat from the burning city, before the last stand on the island of Solstheim. Before the Moesring.

He remembered that much more clearly. Remembered the chaos of the battle, the fury of the Atmoran forces, and how they cut down his friends and family around him. The Snow Prince's personal guard of pikemen and Elite Vampires could do little in the face of the human assault, but they fought until the end. The Snow Prince himself was almost untouchable, plunging his spear deep into the bodies of the enemy, freezing whole waves of them at once with his ice magic. The battle looked like it would turn in their favour, but suddenly a sword came scything out from nowhere, slipping through his protective armor of ice and mammoth ivory and burying itself deep in his ribcage.

A little girl had felled the mighty warrior out of sorrow for her slain mother. The retreat turned into a rout, then a slaughter; those who made it out sought shelter among the Dwemer, invoking ancient alliances. Ammeanas followed at first, for what other choice did he have? The Dwemer promised to give them safe harbor and help them in their quest for vengeance. However, the weeks turned into months, and months to years. Eventually, the Dwemer announced a grand banquet for all of the survivors of the Moesring, and everyone was happy to attend.

The feast was magnificent; whole mammoths turning over firepits, rich and colourful subterranean vegetation, but as the toast commenced, Ammeanas noticed the smell of the Mzardak fungus. He recalled his mother telling him as a boy, "Never eat this if you want to keep your sight, for while it tastes pleasant, it creates an unshakable habit. Not only that, but the blindness it causes becomes hereditary. Remember that, dear boy, and remember it well."

Ammeanas pretended to drink the spiked toast, and decided to observe what would happen to his fellows. Sure enough, they demanded more the next morning, and every morning thereafter, until one day they all woke with fused eyelids and no sight. In the inevitable tumult that followed, he snuck out of the city and hid in an abandoned shack in the woods aboveground.

Time passed. Ammeanas survived on wild game, shooting hawks and rabbits with a crude longbow and cooking them cautiously over a small fire, careful not to attract attentjon from the dwemer patrols. One day, he was wandering the wilds looking for his next meal, when he was ambushed and arrested by a small troop of soldiers. They brought him to the fabled city of Falzhardum Din for interrogation and eventual execution. In his absence, the oppressed, blinded Snow Elves had rebelled against their overlords, and were now considered enemies.

The interrogation proved fruitless - how could he have known anything after an exile of hundreds of years? - and thus an execution was scheduled. There was an air of general celebration that day in the depths of the city, for the war effort against the Chimer was going well, and Chief Tonal Architect Kagrenac was getting ready to summon the gods themselves using the power of the Heart of Lorkhan. The Lord of Falzhardum Din stood on a podium in front of a massive crowd and declared, "We have beat back the Falmer upstarts. We are driving the Chimer into the ground. Is there anything we cannot do?"

He then promptly vanished. As a matter of fact, so did every other Deep Elf in Skyrim. Ammeanas, now alone in the city but for the skeevers and spiders, took the opportunity to try and locate his kin, but in the hundreds of years since he had left, they had degenerated into brutish beasts, and attacked him as soon as he approached. Now an old, broken mer, he hid in an abandoned alchemy lab, seeking solace among the familiar alchemical reagents.

There, he noticed something odd; a bright red Soreyalia plant that produced a high keening sound as opposed to the regular gentle whine. As taught by his mother, he ingested the plant and attempted to observe the symptoms. He felt an unexpected boost of energy and vitality that made him feel young again. Turning to a mirror, he saw with wonder that his wrinkles had vanished and his skin regained the coating of fine ice powder that Falmer possesed in early adulthood.

Thus began his new existence, creating potions of youth and brooding over the collapse of his people. He spent most of his days stewing in misery and hatred, hatred for the Dwemer, hatred for their constructs, and above all, hatred for the Atmorans. Whenever an adventurer descended to his home, he would capture them, question them ruthlessly on the world above, then send them out into the wilderness of what he learned was now called Blackreach.

Eventually, he caught a rumour; a rumour of a civil war between the descendants of the Atmorans and an empire which controlled the region. He also heard of a faction of militant mer called the Thalmor, who would stop at nothing to see the worship of the human god Talos outlawed and utterly destroyed. Skyrim was riven by strife and conflict, and his hated enemies were weak and besieged by a force far greater than them. The time for revenge had come.

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This is actually a backstory for my current character, who is a Snow Elf (by the virtue of mods).

Ammeanas remembered only fragments of his childhood in Skyrim; His mother preparing healing mixtures for his ill grandparents; watching his artisan father carve a memorial; seeing his elder brothers training in the courtyard of their house with spears, swords and bows. And what bows! They were beautiful, laminated and engraved affairs which, for all their beauty, could drive an arrow deep into a mammoth's hide. That was before the war, of course... before the panicked retreat from the burning city, before the last stand on the island of Solstheim. Before the Moesring.

He remembered that much more clearly. Remembered the chaos of the battle, the fury of the Atmoran forces, and how they cut down his friends and family around him. The Snow Prince's personal guard of pikemen and Elite Vampires could do little in the face of the human assault, but they fought until the end. The Snow Prince himself was almost untouchable, plunging his spear deep into the bodies of the enemy, freezing whole waves of them at once with his ice magic. The battle looked like it would turn in their favour, but suddenly a sword came scything out from nowhere, slipping through his protective armor of ice and mammoth ivory and burying itself deep in his ribcage.

A little girl had felled the mighty warrior out of sorrow for her slain mother. The retreat turned into a rout, then a slaughter; those who made it out sought shelter among the Dwemer, invoking ancient alliances. Ammeanas followed at first, for what other choice did he have? The Dwemer promised to give them safe harbor and help them in their quest for vengeance. However, the weeks turned into months, and months to years. Eventually, the Dwemer announced a grand banquet for all of the survivors of the Moesring, and everyone was happy to attend.

The feast was magnificent; whole mammoths turning over firepits, rich and colourful subterranean vegetation, but as the toast commenced, Ammeanas noticed the smell of the Mzardak fungus. He recalled his mother telling him as a boy, "Never eat this if you want to keep your sight, for while it tastes pleasant, it creates an unshakable habit. Not only that, but the blindness it causes becomes hereditary. Remember that, dear boy, and remember it well."

Ammeanas pretended to drink the spiked toast, and decided to observe what would happen to his fellows. Sure enough, they demanded more the next morning, and every morning thereafter, until one day they all woke with fused eyelids and no sight. In the inevitable tumult that followed, he snuck out of the city and hid in an abandoned shack in the woods aboveground.

Time passed. Ammeanas survived on wild game, shooting hawks and rabbits with a crude longbow and cooking them cautiously over a small fire, careful not to attract attentjon from the dwemer patrols. One day, he was wandering the wilds looking for his next meal, when he was ambushed and arrested by a small troop of soldiers. They brought him to the fabled city of Falzhardum Din for interrogation and eventual execution. In his absence, the oppressed, blinded Snow Elves had rebelled against their overlords, and were now considered enemies.

The interrogation proved fruitless - how could he have known anything after an exile of hundreds of years? - and thus an execution was scheduled. There was an air of general celebration that day in the depths of the city, for the war effort against the Chimer was going well, and Chief Tonal Architect Kagrenac was getting ready to summon the gods themselves using the power of the Heart of Lorkhan. The Lord of Falzhardum Din stood on a podium in front of a massive crowd and declared, "We have beat back the Falmer upstarts. We are driving the Chimer into the ground. Is there anything we cannot do?"

He then promptly vanished. As a matter of fact, so did every other Deep Elf in Skyrim. Ammeanas, now alone in the city but for the skeevers and spiders, took the opportunity to try and locate his kin, but in the hundreds of years since he had left, they had degenerated into brutish beasts, and attacked him as soon as he approached. Now an old, broken mer, he hid in an abandoned alchemy lab, seeking solace among the familiar alchemical reagents.

There, he noticed something odd; a bright red Soreyalia plant that produced a high keening sound as opposed to the regular gentle whine. As taught by his mother, he ingested the plant and attempted to observe the symptoms. He felt an unexpected boost of energy and vitality that made him feel young again. Turning to a mirror, he saw with wonder that his wrinkles had vanished and his skin regained the coating of fine ice powder that Falmer possesed in early adulthood.

Thus began his new existence, creating potions of youth and brooding over the collapse of his people. He spent most of his days stewing in misery and hatred, hatred for the Dwemer, hatred for their constructs, and above all, hatred for the Atmorans. Whenever an adventurer descended to his home, he would capture them, question them ruthlessly on the world above, then send them out into the wilderness of what he learned was now called Blackreach.

Eventually, he caught a rumour; a rumour of a civil war between the descendants of the Atmorans and an empire which controlled the region. He also heard of a faction of militant mer called the Thalmor, who would stop at nothing to see the worship of the human god Talos outlawed and utterly destroyed. Skyrim was riven by strife and conflict, and his hated enemies were weak and besieged by a force far greater than them. The time for revenge had come.

Crouched in a forest in Elyswer, aiming down the sight of a long bow notched with a poisoned arrow, Ez’eera let it fly. The deer went straight down the posion instantly going to the heart of the animal, Ez’eera knowing she would be safe from the poison because she had created a poison with which kahjit were immune.
Ez’eera had never known her parents, being born with a scar across her nose and with magical ability’s her parents had shunned her and thrown her out when she was but a cub.
Heading back to her camp with her kill, thanking the animals spirit for the food she was about to enjoy, her mind continued to pace backwards and forwards about the thalmor oppression in Elswyer. Ez’eera had seen right through the thalmor when they had said that they had brought back the moons, Ez’eera was one of the very few that did.
Growing up the wild, Ez’eera remembers stumbling across a hunters old rusted iron sword when she was a cub, and had began practising from a very early age. Her magical ablitys had come naturally and she had spent years perfecting them, using Ice destruction to keep her safe when she needed to defend her self and restoration for healing her wounds. She would also sell some meat in town to get a bit of cash for something sweet, cheese and milk. Ez’eera had a particular fondness for sweet foods, cheese and milk.
Sitting down at her camp she began skinning the animal with expert precession. She had made up her mind, she would leave Elswyer in search of a new home. She felt suffocated by the thalmor.
Backing what few belonging’s she had and buying some cheese and milk for the journey she set off.
Heading north through Cyrodil, Ez’eera wasn’t too sure where she would end up but was happy she had made the decision to leave elswyer.
Setting up camp one evening in northern cyrodil, she had spotted some deer. Deciding she would hunt she left her belonging’s and took a bow and poisoned an arrow.
Sneaking through the forest not making a sound, she had the deer in sight. Suddenly a noise of a horse cart startled the deer and it fled. The next moment was a blur for Ez’eera. Imperial guards had knocked her clean out.

One handed (swords)
Destruction (ice)
Archery
Restoration
Light armour
Alchemy
Enchanting
Eat and sleeps
No fast travel
Playing on expert
 
Ez'eera's a spellsword mainly defensive ice spells her range combat is with the bow and arrow and spellsword for up close and personal. Also play with limited hud (have it just enough so i can barely see my health magicka and armour) and no crosshair. I do this cause i find it much more immersive : ) Also not buy anything from any vendor apart from arrows and food ; )
sorry about the reposting so many times forgot to put it all on one.
 

OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.
Going for the immersive experience, eh? I've never tried it myself, maybe I will on my next character.
 

elijahskyrim2

The Last Vampire, to End all Vampires
Ovoid, This is incredibly well written and you did a wonderful job of keeping me hooked on the story the whole time. I love that way you described each and every detail the character experienced throughout his life. Thumps up from me!
 

OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.
Thanks a lot! This was the first piece of fanfiction I've ever written and I was worried it would be substandard.
 
Going for the immersive experience, eh? I've never tried it myself, maybe I will on my next character.
Yeah this is the first character ive decided to go for the immersive experience and am enjoying it alot. I think my next charactrer is going to be a necromancer : )
 

OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.
I suggest a summoner character, personally; necromancers stop being able to reanimate things as the enemies level with them, so the higher your level the less effective you are at combat. Pretty much all mage characters have that flaw, so if you wish to go that route perhaps you can level one weapon skill.
 
You make a very fair point :) On a previous play through of mine, my dark elf (Akurus) was a battle mage and utilized summoning. Although i did find it very fun, im really looking forward to the idea of reanimating corpses. With what you said in mind though, i might go the Mystic Necromancer route which could be a fun twist. Utilize 1 handed bound weapons, and a bound bow, and delve into alteration for the more up close and personal situations. Is your current play through (your snow elf) specializing in any specific skills?
 

OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.
He's an archer, and uses an Ancient Falmer Bow from a mod. His main magic school is Illusion, and I'm also going for Heavy Armor and two-handed for the aforementioned "up close and personal" situations, although I find it's usually more effective to switch to vampire lord.
 
He's an archer, and uses an Ancient Falmer Bow from a mod. His main magic school is Illusion, and I'm also going for Heavy Armor and two-handed for the aforementioned "up close and personal" situations, although I find it's usually more effective to switch to vampire lord.
Sounds good to me :) Illusion is a really fun school of magic. Of course i understand if its too much hassle but would you be able to post a picture of your ancient falmer bow? i am without mods and very intrigued as to what it looks like.
 

OvoidAxhead

When a regular axe just won't cut it.

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