I'm pretty sure part of something being a 'Let's Play' is the use of a mic and having your commentary. Your mouse is also shown, and the video is generally poor quality. You haven't listed whether you are using any mods or DLC, and the spam of words in the description makes you look like a spammer.
Skyrim LPs have been done into the ground; it's all or nothing if you're going to do an LP of a popular game and expect to get viewers. Doing something interesting/different and putting yourself into the game as a commentator or even roleplaying makes it interesting.
I don't watch Gopher's LPs because he's playing Skyrim or another game; I watch them because his videos are of great quality, I know what mods/DLC he is or isn't using, and -- this is the most important thing -- Gopher's commentary is amusing, interesting, and sometimes hilarious.
Nothing about your video stands out.