fellowknight
The Devil In The Details
WOOOOT! JERRY, MAKE THE CELEBRATION SANDWICHES! YES WE HAVE CELEBRATION SADNWICHES! IN THE FRIDGE! WELL, GEE I WONDER WHAT THEY SAY ON THE BAG! OW! SONOFA- DON'T THROW THEM AT ME, YOU ASS! GAH!
Anyways, yay! I'm back and STILL interested in this RP. I've just lost inspiration for a while. But onto my post.
I realize at some parts may be problems. For instance, at the scene where Baroth describes the man in the shadows (Madrar's Severus), he says that they were basically the first two up and adam to arrive at the gates, if only a few minutes apart. Now naturally, a vampire, as Severus said, doesn't need sleep, so of course he'd arrive before mostly anyone. Then Baroth just decided to wake up early and get there ASAP so as to not miss the band. I personally don't see a problem with this, as in this RP I am trying to get Baroth more organized and compare him to you-know-who (The Hunt, hint-hint). But I certainly can see how others would take this into offense.
Then Baroth's not-so-little comment. I can see how at some parts he was a bit over the top and a little obnoxious, but I think we all can see how he was simply trying to stress the issue and get the others to work it out. I, personally, at one part, thought he sounded a lot like Simus would, no offense intended.
But if there are any problems, please come talk to me and address them and i'll edit them out.
Thanks for reading!
Anyways, yay! I'm back and STILL interested in this RP. I've just lost inspiration for a while. But onto my post.
I realize at some parts may be problems. For instance, at the scene where Baroth describes the man in the shadows (Madrar's Severus), he says that they were basically the first two up and adam to arrive at the gates, if only a few minutes apart. Now naturally, a vampire, as Severus said, doesn't need sleep, so of course he'd arrive before mostly anyone. Then Baroth just decided to wake up early and get there ASAP so as to not miss the band. I personally don't see a problem with this, as in this RP I am trying to get Baroth more organized and compare him to you-know-who (The Hunt, hint-hint). But I certainly can see how others would take this into offense.
Then Baroth's not-so-little comment. I can see how at some parts he was a bit over the top and a little obnoxious, but I think we all can see how he was simply trying to stress the issue and get the others to work it out. I, personally, at one part, thought he sounded a lot like Simus would, no offense intended.
But if there are any problems, please come talk to me and address them and i'll edit them out.
Thanks for reading!