Like it? I loved it! Well done, both of you! Time for Beren to do his thing!
EDIT:
Phew! Okay, let me know if that was too overpowered. Bear in mind, Beren's not "magically undoing everything" he's more begging Arkay to snatch Alice from the jaws of death. I hope this doesn't invalidate anything for anyone, especially the pair of you that wrote up that fight scene.