Oh yeah, your CC was fine, on my end you're accepted
*puts on the unholy and infamous bad guy mask*
I dislike the idea of there being an actual living incarnate god. None of us have thus far made it so real, there's legends and there's stories that keep people believing the same faith but there is no real life figure, and I'd like to keep it that way. If your god could come incarnate there's no point of different religions anymore, because that just proves your religion is the most credible.
So change that, make the whole "Nargos incarnate appeared" more of a story than reality. I really have no idea on how to do this without hurting your current plot, but maybe you can come up with something. I was hoping that in this RP is about Rotafar, as a realistic world with touches of fantasy, not a world governed by fantasy.
That said, granting you the privilege of an actual real alive god would make everyone want their own alive god, and that just seems to chaotic and I think it wouldn't fit in this actual RP.
*remove bad guy mask*
I'm also working on a post, but i will be gone for a few days starting tomorrow, so I might have to complete it after I come back if I'm sober enough.