Thanks! That's very kind of you - it's really fun to write, especially the little things that bring Murzuth out of her trance a little.
Re: Jyggalag, I know this is a minority opinion, but I'm really not convinced that he doesn't hold the seeds of being the Prince of Madness inside him all along. He's a being of absolute law and perfectionism, and can't tolerate the idea of anything being outside his control or in any way unpredictable or subject to change - he's got pretty monstrous OCD/control-freakery. Plus he's literally made of crystal - a fragile being, hard and sharp and spined but liable to break (down?) at any moment.
While Sheogorath may embody raving manic and demented madness and disorder, he rules over a kingdom (the Shivering Isles) that is, its own inimitable way, fairly ordered and well-organised. While Jyggalag and his followers talk an almighty lot about order and claim to loathe madness (which is true in many cases), they do so in a fairly mad and deranged way - loathing reasonable concepts like free will, putting everyone who disagrees with you to the sword, and then deciding that those other Daedric Princes are looking at you funny and that the voices in your head are telling you to kill 'em all. On the one hand, Sheogorath and Jyggalag are polar opposites, but on the other, they're pretty dark reflections of one another.
I guess that's one of the reasons I like Murzuth as a character - she's
so devoted to Order and the demands of her god (who is himself of deeply questionable sanity), and so far removed from ordinary humanity, that she's beginning to look slightly weird and off-kilter herself. As to her language, well, partly that's because I enjoy using words rather promiscuously and don't have much in the way of a shutoff valve, and partly because, if Vivec and all the stuff that Michael Kirkbride's written in the TES lore, fairly enlightened beings do talk in quasi-gibberish laden down with a lot of mystic symbolism.
This ends today's disquisition and tl;dr on all things Daedric and mystical.