That's better, but I still think that you're stuck on what equipment your character has. I like that you added something that he likes and what expression he has. Keep doing that, you can never have too much description.ok...
NAME: MR MEME
RACE:NORD
Class:2x Dragonbanes, a silent but dealdy(<tis not what you thinK!!),so pretty much like a ninja, and a master theif.
Description:wearing assasin armour with a preist mask,has black hair and sisnister looking look on his face all the time,his faverote thing to do is kiiling imperials,
Yeah, because I figured in your intro you could add all the little things that make your character yours.actually znow didn't want a bio or personality just name, gender, age, and class