Here's my revised CC
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Name: Drayce Sibari
Race: Khajiit
Age: 19
Sexuality: Straight
Laterality: Right-handed
Height: 5 foot 6
Weight: 185 pounds
Build: Lean, yet powerful
Appearance:
Drayce has light gray fur with the dark black markings seen in the picture. The thickest lines sit around his eyes, cheekbones, and muzzle giving him an icy glare. Drayce has gray hair - not due to age, obviously - in a choppy medium-length style that resembles a spiked-up look. He does have the beard...thing seen in the picture, and does not have any braids in it. His eyes are deep blue with silver highlights, amplifying his icy gaze. Drayce has a number of minor scars on his hands and chest, but the largest is a wide, jagged line running from the left side of his waist to his right shoulder.
Mark:
Drayce's mark is essentially Faith's tattoo from Mirror's Edge, however his is much larger and takes up his entire left arm. The symbol of Akatosh - the same one from the in-game amulet - resides in the center of the lower half of the Mark and sits on Drayce's forearm, nearest the elbow.
Afflictions: Raging Insomnia, Schizoid Personality Disorder, and blindness in his left eye.
Divine: Akatosh/Auriel/Alkosh
Apparel: Normally, Drayce wears a modified set of mage robes. Instead of the multi-colored set, Drayce's are completely black with gray stitching. In addition to the color changes, pads of leather armor are attached to the inside to provide decent protection without making the set very heavy. In addition to the robes, Drayce wears a pair of mage boots and a mage hood, both of them black with gray stitching. Built into the mage hood is a black mask that covers all of Drayce's face except for his right eye. When not in his armor, Drayce wears a red tunic with black pants and black boots. He also has an amulet of Akatosh that never leaves his neck.
Weapons: Black Elven bow, steel arrows, and an Elven dagger.
Combat Skills: Drayce is a master archer with extremely steady hands. He is skilled with the Elven dagger and is very deadly in unarmed combat, knowing more than a few styles of martial arts. However, his eye hinders his ability to take on targets at close range because he lacks a wide field of view. Even though he is skilled at close range, he simply can't keep up with those with full sight. He prefers to stay at range and concealed in the shadows.
Other Skills: Stealth. Drayce, like any Khajiit, is a ghost and can disappear within the shadows. Freerunning. Drayce places high importance on evasion and has honed his skills as a Freerunner. This skill also helps him get to certain shooting positions and scale tall buildings.
Backstory:
Drayce was born in Riften, inside the abandoned Ratway. His parents took notice of his mark at birth and kept him in the Ratway for his protection, keeping his existence hidden from his brother. Life in the Ratway was anything but safe, and Drayce had to learn how to defend himself or stay hidden. His affinity for stealth was born out of this, as well as his focus on evasion. When Drayce was five, his father was killed while trying to sneak into the Ratway to feed young Drayce. It turns out that Drayce was very close to his father when he was killed and witnessed the murder. Each moment is burned into Drayce's mind, and often haunts him. Especially since he carries his father's Elven dagger. Drayce's brother was taken not long after, and has not been seen since Daedra abducted him. After witnessing his family's destruction, Drayce swore to free his mother and as as many others as he can or die trying. Drayce left the Ratway at 12 years old and has spent every moment since then running and honing his skills in combat.
Personality: Drayce is cool and collected, but prefers to stay silent. He approaches people and conversations with a business-like attitude and keeps everything straight and to the point. He has very poor social skills and spends most of his time alone. He is notably uncomfortable in social situations and prefers to avoid them wherever he can. Aside from poor social skills, Drayce automatically assumes everyone he meets will try to stab him in the back.
