I like the unique combat style, and the fear. But a couple things; one, your picture doesn't work
The main problems are these: He doesn't seem a very lore-friendly character. His combat style does, but his name and background don't; his name seems like something IRL and his background seems too... I don't know, too convenient. Like getting thrown out for being a "demon". Stuff like that; I'd prefer all the supernatural stuff to be left out of this RP (except for magic, of course), so that we end up with a gritty, realistic RP, rather than a fantastically idealised one.
Second, and I think last, would it be possible at any point to create a character completely independently from Destiny? I feel like two characters having the same backstory might well cause some restrictions with development.
And as for your issues with not posting for the next few days; READ THE PREVIOUS MESSAGES
I jest, I jest. I said before that the IC won't be up until at least the 20th, so the next few days is no problem at all.