Act III: Shutdown - Development Thread

[Spenny]

Here is the original story for Act III: Shutdown:

http://i.imgur.com/iVl12.jpg

Essentially it is the "Good" ending if you will, you put the evil doers out of business.

Any comments, thoughts or improvements can be posted here!

 

[phantom cat]

plz dont get rid of my thiefness its all i have and the dark brother hood there just fun now, wait i have a question if your keep the dark brother hood in the story there are two diffrent ways to subject your self into the involment of the dark brother hood you can (1) kill them or (2) join them if one person joins them and another kills them wouldnt the killing one have to kill the one that has joined oh no ive gone cross eyed but really i would just suggest having random brother hood people run around mybe you might catch one killing some poor old man

 

[rowynyew]

OOO I didn't expect the turn with the child. Nice, guess we were thinking along the same lines.