Heya Meben, I just read the prologue.
Sorry I've been so slow to read, just been up to my ears in work stuff and trying to get my own story updated.
Anyway, what I've seen so far is very well done! You have a knack for description and dialogue. I know you probably didn't mean for this, but I actually found myself feeling badly for the Imperial captain by the end. You've managed to make a briefly appearing character sympathetic in such a way. Maybe because I'm personally biased as well. xD
But in any case, well written and as Bulba said, it's a neat premise! I will be reading on very soon and am excited to do so. The only thing I can say right now as far as any critiques is you have a few minor grammatical errors here and there (hardly any really) but that's really it. You've broken up the dialogue in such a way that makes it easy to follow, so that's good.
Excellent work so far!