Spoiler There May Be Pain in the Night

*Slap*

FINISH THE CHAPTER OR DANCING TALEN-JEI WILL COME LOOKING FOR YOU

...Hate having to bring out the big guns, but it's apparently necessary.

OH SWEET BABY JESUS HELP ME! okay I'm working...

You have a successful story in your hands, don´t stop!

Yo troll, FINISH THE CHAPTER OR MAI"IQ(spelling?) WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND BEAT YOU LIKE THE BADASS THAT HE IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job on the story so far Troll and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Thanks a lot! Now I just have to grit my teeth and get the last bit of the chapter done

You deserve an award!

Hahaha thanks! But I highly doubt that

No, you definitely do deserve one Troll!

Now...about that next chapter. *raises hand to summon dancing Talen-Jei*

I know, I know! I had a busy weekend! I'm sorrrryyyy

Haha, no worries! I have no room to talk, I've been really laggy with my chapters. I blame end of the semester insanity.

Please finish the third chapter! I am really liking this and from what I've seen, your a pretty darn good writer. You most definitely aren't a writing noob. I like the way you describe things, those little details are what I think make a good story. Anyway, keep it up!

Thanks a lot! I'm not feeling too well today, but I'm gonna try to finish it up tonight after I medicate myself.

Well if you're sick you need to rest up and get better before working on the chapter! Don't work if you don't feel like it!

*Ahem* About this fiction guys. I had a sudden loss of interest in a lot of things lately, this included. However, I am feeling extremely motivated today, and I had an exellent idea for the direction of the chapter and the story! But that means I'm actually scrapping what I had written of chapter three and starting almost from scratch. So, give me some time... this chapter is going to get real personal and I hope that you will like it!

Here is an adorkable puppy for your enjoyment while you wait:

Interesting story so far man! I could be bias, since I'm also writing about a Redguard. They both seem to find themselves in a strange land with troubled past. Again good stuff. I noticed a few things, mostly a couple of spelling and grammar errors. But I'm no expert myself so I would go beyond that! While I like the direction it is going I'd like to see just a little more direction. Hard for me to explain I guess. I'm not great with critique. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks! Honestly, I think I should be a little bit more nit-picky with this like you are with yours. I think it would be better that way! About the lack of direction: up until just about an hour ago, I honestly had no idea where I really wanted this story to go! Hahaha so that could explain it

Haha. Well I'm just anal when it comes to things I do! I usually let the story write itself but I go over what I write numerous times and make adjustments. I changed the Redguards' name three or four times before posting!

One thing I like to do is use italics when using flashbacks. It sort of seperates it from the main story. I also use first person narrative for it as well. I don't know why. Makes it a little more personal I guess?

Soooo, loyal readers (if I even have any of those anymore) I just have to give you guys a heads-up. I am currently dealing with a lot of person issues and turbulance in my life and I've been finding it hard to write. I'm not a happy camper. So, even though I don't want to say this, my story will be on hiatus until further notice.

Thanks for the support though everyone!