Blitzz
A Friendly Brit
The Dawnsplitter Legend is a fan-fiction (my first one, try to be nice? ) about a group of lowlife bandits in Skyrim, that yearn for more. They hear of an ancient tale passed on for generations, a tale that speaks of a flagship from an old Yokudan fleet, a floating fortress, teeming with the riches of the lost continent. It was the centerpiece of the ancient Yokudan fleet, but it disappeared overnight before the fleet reached Hammerfell, taking the millions of gold's worth of treasures with it. Whoever finds it would be revered, the glory and wealth would be unimaginable. However, no-one had ever been fool enough to try, and so the legend vanished from Tamriel, recorded only in encoded tomes lost to the ages. It stayed that way for hundreds of years, before a hopeful group of fame-seekers stumble across an unimaginable secret.
Characters:
Kah-Jusaad - The leader figure in the group, a very tall, slight and dark-skinned Argonian with a fiery temper and great ambitions.
Zarajev - A small and witty Argonian with pale skin and small horns. Like a little brother to Kah-Jusaad, thought of as second in command.
Ki'Raas - A muscular Khajiit with dark brown fur and lots of scars, a fairly old and wise member of the group, and a very well respected one.
Zaahrjii - A large female Khajiit with a silver tongue and lots of cunning, the only one that really seems to threaten Kah-Jusaad's position with her persuasive prowess.
Skelrr - A headstrong, teenage Nord woman, with brunette hair. A loud and brash member with little experience.
Diroch - An average-sized Bosmer man, a dull and remarkably intelligent man, who seems to be the best in the group at holding on to their coin.
Jarrik - A very tall and muscular Redguard man, and a true pirate through and through. He has the greatest sense of adventure among them and spends a lot of time thinking of ways to get rich quick.
S'aden - A Redguard woman, a tall but slim beauty with dark skin, hair and eyes, a very naive, gullible and sensitive member of the group.
This is the eight-man group that our story will focus on, and the story may hold a few new additions as it progresses.
Any feedback will be most appreciated, both positive and negative. Normally my creative writing receives good feedback but this is the first time I've ever written a fan-fiction, so cut me some slack. None of the chapters will be particularly long, 2000 words or so, but there will be 13 of them in total.
Characters:
Kah-Jusaad - The leader figure in the group, a very tall, slight and dark-skinned Argonian with a fiery temper and great ambitions.
Zarajev - A small and witty Argonian with pale skin and small horns. Like a little brother to Kah-Jusaad, thought of as second in command.
Ki'Raas - A muscular Khajiit with dark brown fur and lots of scars, a fairly old and wise member of the group, and a very well respected one.
Zaahrjii - A large female Khajiit with a silver tongue and lots of cunning, the only one that really seems to threaten Kah-Jusaad's position with her persuasive prowess.
Skelrr - A headstrong, teenage Nord woman, with brunette hair. A loud and brash member with little experience.
Diroch - An average-sized Bosmer man, a dull and remarkably intelligent man, who seems to be the best in the group at holding on to their coin.
Jarrik - A very tall and muscular Redguard man, and a true pirate through and through. He has the greatest sense of adventure among them and spends a lot of time thinking of ways to get rich quick.
S'aden - A Redguard woman, a tall but slim beauty with dark skin, hair and eyes, a very naive, gullible and sensitive member of the group.
This is the eight-man group that our story will focus on, and the story may hold a few new additions as it progresses.
Any feedback will be most appreciated, both positive and negative. Normally my creative writing receives good feedback but this is the first time I've ever written a fan-fiction, so cut me some slack. None of the chapters will be particularly long, 2000 words or so, but there will be 13 of them in total.