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The Apprentice

Discussion in 'Skyrim Fan Fiction' started by Harc, Sep 16, 2013.

  1. Harc

    Harc Knight-Paladin Aurelion

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    The courier paced towards Indaryl with much slowness to his step. Indaryl was annoyed due to the fact that he didn't know if the courier was lost or looking for someone else. The courier approached him and said:

    "I've been looking for you, there's an urgent letter here that has to meet your hands."

    "Oh well please rest! I can tell you rushed my way to deliver the most urgent mail!" Indaryl said in a sarcastic tone. He took the letter to read it, but the courier just stood there with a giddy obnoxious smile on his face, just staring at Indaryl, perhaps hinting that he wanted a tip. Indaryl said:

    "Oh silly me! I almost forgot your tip, here you go my good man!" Indaryl reached in his pocket and pulled out some string from his robe and some Ash yams. The courier took it and dropped the tip almost immediately and walked out of the college with his head down in shame. Upon opening the letter he noticed the seal of house Telvanni. He then read the letter, which said:

    "This letter stands as official orders for the Telvanni Spellwright "Indaryl Fyryn" stationed at the college of winterhold in Skyrim. You are to be reassigned to a superior Telvanni Asset Master Wizard "Neloth" at Tel Mithryn in the Dunmer isle of Solstheim. Orders effective immediately, please proceed to your nearest port and depart when felt appropriate." Signed by Magister Sandysil.

    "By Azura a reassignment! This is the work of Magic for sure!" Indaryl pleaded in enjoyment. He rushed to the courier who still held his head in shame, and said

    "My good man! Here take this!" He reached in his pocket and gave him 150 septims. The couriers face went from sad to giddy as he skipped his way out of the college he tripped on a piece of rubble, face-planted on the cold stone path , and fell off the narrow walkway to his death. His screams bellowed in the air. Indaryl stood in utter shock his jaw dropped, as he leaned over to see the dead man afloat in the sea of ghosts he said:

    "Bullocks! 150 septims gone because of that clumsy Breton!" He launched some lighting bolts to desecrate the body of the courier. Then he tranced back into the college. Humming the words "reassignment" in different rhythms out loud, the most annoying figure in the college muttered "reassignment?" He tried to keep walking away, but he only heard footsteps approach from behind him anywhere he went. " Azura spare me from this fool" he said in his head as he turned around to see Ancano with a goofy smile on his face hinting that Indaryl said something cheesy.
     
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  2. ThEpicProphet

    ThEpicProphet New Member

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    Great character you have there! Loved the humor! As you make more chapters, It would be advisable to make a table of contents in the first post linking the chapters to make It easier for new readers, as they wouldn't have to scroll down to find them. Also, your story have potential, don't hesitate making the chapters bigger if you feel like It, If not, this format is good as well. Keep It up!
     
  3. Harc

    Harc Knight-Paladin Aurelion

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    Thanks man! Yeah I have to make a TOC, and I'm probably gonna make a new chapter tonight, one bigger than this one too :D
     
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    Looking foward to It!
     
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    Harc Knight-Paladin Aurelion

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    "And where is your reassignment taking you?" Ancano said.

    "Well to be quite Honest Ancano, it's really none of your business, but if you must know, I'm going to a Dunmer isle known as Solstheim. Never been there, but it sounds more suitable to my liking." Indaryl replied.

    "Solstheim... I have a colleague there. According to his description, it's rather smelly and dull. Although Ancarion was never quite to polite or descriptive." Stated Ancano

    "The testimonies of your friends don't interest me Ancano, I don't know why you bother talking to me truth be told." Indaryl said with anger. "You should be attending to my cousin, I'm sure he is in dyer need of your presence." He also said in a sarcastic tone.

    Ancano now had somewhat of a sneer of disgust on his face. His golden yellow skin seemed to have turned darker, and he stated:

    "I'm on to you Wizard! Don't you dare think for a minute that my eyes do not tread upon your every action, for you would be wrong!" Ancano stormed off without giving Indaryl a chance to reply to his unprovoked scold.

    The time was 10:34 PM and Indaryl was walking into his sleeping chambers to retire for the night. As he lay in bed, he thought of what could be of his new orders and his future colleague. He knew he couldn't take Tone he does now with the subordinates at the college here. For Neloth was a superior to him. It was peaceful and quiet for about ten minutes. Indaryl laid upon his bed facing the wall opposite side of the door. He turned the other way only to awaken to a shadowy cat like humanoid at the doorway. "Oh no." He said In his head. For 2 minutes they gazed at each other. Then, the cat man let out a large grunt, and a loud clapping noise bellowed from his anus. The smell filled the room with haste. After the cat had done what he had done he left the room and continued to his chambers. The smell filled the room for the entire night.

    Morning came about quick as he rolled out of his bed and put on his robe and shoes. Today he would travel to Dawnstar to catch passage to Solstheim. He made his way to his cousin's chambers to say his farewells, only to be approached by him on the way.

    "Ancano tells me you have a reassignment? Such a shame." Said Savos.

    "Ancano tells you everything doesn't he? Well yes, I'm to be on my way to the Dunmer isle of Solstheim. To assist an indirect superior of mine. I do so hope it's more enjoyable than this wretched Domiscile you call a college." Indaryl stated

    "Quite rude of you Indaryl. I suspected at least some appreciation from you, but I'm sure you'll learn to enjoy." Right at that moment the college had taken a barrage of lighting from an unknown caster.
     
  6. ultimatedovahkiin

    ultimatedovahkiin Now's not the time for fear. That comes later.

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    You're late. The next chapter was due months ago. Gotta step up your game Harc! :D I'm just kidding, nice chapter. Good cliff hanger.
     
  7. Harc

    Harc Knight-Paladin Aurelion

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    Sorry, yeah I am a little late. I'll be more active from here on out. I had a long period of abscence. Glad you liked it though ! :)
     
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    This is fantastic! I loved the cliffhanger, I hope this continues.
     
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