I will edit it later but I would like to add that unless Runa was standing right next to re, which she was not, she would not have heard what she said. If you wouldn't mind editing that would be great.
But seriously, sorry to ruin your post Runa but you'll have to find another focus. Especially as she is whispering far away from you, while someone else is talking loudly enough for everyone to hear.
I mean he is a man... and his main attribute to strangers is his meat...
JUST saying...
xD well it certainly didn't seem quiet... And maybe I missed where she got closer, as she appeared to introduce herself from the same location. Kind of important to say that she is whispering when she is.
Runa is just a character though, so don't take it personally or anything. Her thinking that sentence that included the bit about 'man-meat' was just her being, well, her. xD She would never say that out loud anyway. lol
Eh, I will make another post, or at least cut that part out, I guess.
Hissed wich has certain connotations would imply that, I'm not sure how just the words themselves would impact the octave. It would be tiresome to write if I had to always say whispered. Synonyms are beautiful things.