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  1. DenmarkSelf

    What are you currently listening to?

    Finally got the new Slot album, so I've been blasting that for the last few days non-stop. Also tuning into the newer Senser, but I can't find the album anywhere.
  2. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    CHAPTER 5 “I know this is a lot to take in. How are you holding up?” One of the seven faces spoke, but whoever actually said it didn't register with Xak. No longer sitting in the cramped cockpit of an aerotech, he now found himself sitting quietly in a secret room underneath the floor of...
  3. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    CHAPTER 4 All was dark. Murky water stung his eyes. He didn't want to open them again. All that he had seen, had endured, and now the overwhelming weight of a new truth. Masser. The great moon. The sacred dead body of an ancient god had been his prison all along. It was too much to accept...
  4. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    CHAPTER 3 "Good morning, Doctor." Xak counted his eleventh trip to Dr. Adrus' laboratory. The first six started with him begging for answers or mercy. Today he had something else in mind. "Ah, good morning Xak." He caught the old elf off guard. "You seem to be in a better mood lately...
  5. DenmarkSelf

    The Winds of Frostfall

    Nice work. Looks like you've put a lot of thought into your characters. However, there's way too much exposition in this opening scene. We're learning all there is about characters we don't yet care about. Characters should be slowly unraveling mysteries with their personality and background...
  6. DenmarkSelf

    Not much for introductions but...

    Thanks!
  7. DenmarkSelf

    Not much for introductions but...

    So I'm new here. I mostly signed up to publish a story but this looks like a fun little community. I've been a huge Elder Scrolls fan since Morrowind. I've always been drawn to its uniquely dark and abstract setting and the mod community that's sprung up around it. I developed one mod for...
  8. DenmarkSelf

    Writing Help

    Two rules to get better at writing: 1. Read every day. 2. Write every day. Get into the habit of reading every day and you'll be surprised how quickly your writing will evolve.
  9. DenmarkSelf

    Nice music...

    Here's a good song I found by complete accident. Also love the concept and animation of the video.
  10. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    CHAPTER 2 His head pounded like the morning after Sanguine's Festival. Any sense of vision he had was a murky fog of blue and green. Optimism told him he was lying in his Glenpoint home with a bad hangover and one messed up dream. That hope lasted a good ten seconds before his eyes adjusted...
  11. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    CHAPTER 1 28th of Midyear, 4E 211 Ten years after the events of Skyrim. Closing time. In any other business, it's a turn of a key and a sigh of relief. When you run a bar in Tamriel, it's more of an abstract theory. Take a shady tavern in the middle of Glenpoint, for example. The kind of...
  12. DenmarkSelf

    The Voyager's Song (AKA Shattered Moon)

    (AKA Shattered Moon) A lore-friendly cyberpunk thriller. --- It has been ten years since Skyrim's civil war yet chaos still looms in Tamriel. Humble bartender Xak Theril sets out to find his long-lost brother, only to uncover an incredible hidden world of unparalleled technology and...
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