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18+ A New Life
Nice, a little lacking in punctuation, but otherwise good. You could do with describing a little more, the location, character attire, sounds and such. It fleshes your stories out and also immerses your readers in the story you've created. I'm guessing the Rikke in the story is the Imperial...- Castra Tanagra
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- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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A Hunt for Fools
Thanks, first chapter will probably be the longest. There's a lot of background about the D'Garethi house in there, some people who love action and violence might find Breton politics a little tedious. Don't worry, future chapters will be much more action-packed...- Castra Tanagra
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- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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18+ The Voyage of The Wolf Heart
Good, but you could do with a little more detail, take time in your work, a few days, at least...- Castra Tanagra
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- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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18+ Path of the Assassin, Path of the Warrior
Fantastic. I'm a die-hard Breton player on Skyrim, and even I found Belethor to be the most annoying character in the game. Never killed him, but Belethor in my copy of Skyrim has spent more than his fair share of time with a bucket on his head. :D Don't suppose I could get you to look at...- Castra Tanagra
- Post #8
- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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A Hunt for Fools
Chapter 1: As The Crowe Flies Part 1: Brothers in Blood and Nothing More The council room was quiet, tranquil, secluded from the normal bustle of the D'Garethi estate, as long as the Council wasn't in session. A single ray of light filtered down through the tall arch that overlooked the...- Castra Tanagra
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- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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A Hunt for Fools
Prologue: Concerning the Wabbajack As written for Brannigan D'Garethi by Ecklesheare Rune-Wright, Keeper of lore to the ever-glorified House D'Garethi, of the great houses of High Rock. My Lord Brannigan, my deepest apologies for my evasiveness at court today. You see, the subject of...- Castra Tanagra
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- Forum: Skyrim Fan Fiction
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Hail, fellow adventurers!
Thanks, I don't have a profile pic yet, but I'll get one up as soon as possible (and as soon as my computer lets me). I'm sure i'll fit in here, and I could always use someone to proof-read my stories, if you find the time. :)- Castra Tanagra
- Post #3
- Forum: Introductions
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Hail, fellow adventurers!
Err....what can I say? 18 years old, British, complete nerd for anything sci-fi or fantasy related (Apart from Twilight, don't talk to me about Twilight...), hoping to study Creative Writing as a course next year at Uni. Any of you who are currently on the fanfic forums should hear a lot more...- Castra Tanagra
- Post #1
- Forum: Introductions