*attempts to kickstart the RP's heart and get it going again*
It hasn't stopped, at least not on our side of things. Cap's busy and he's got a monster of a post to construct.*attempts to kickstart the RP's heart and get it going again*
*grabs defibrillator*
I noticed a few places that seemed more brief than I thought you'd make them, but it wasn't enough to detract a great deal from the post. That being said, I'm very glad you're taking to the time to refine and improve itGood thing you said that. As I was going through it, I noticed there were bits and pieces that had somehow been removed from my post as I transferred it. I'm not sure how that happened.