EpicVakarian
Calibration-Master General
Hey Captain, I noticed something in your last post, when your guy was talking about his previous battle experience. And I quote,
"I fought on the front lines of Falklands war and after that I was deployed to Afghanistan where I stayed for 10 years I think."
That's physically impossible, considering your guy is 31; I went back and checked. There's two main mistakes here; number one is that if your guy was 31, he was born 2 years after the Falklands War had ended. So, yeah, that's a pretty major thing. Number two is that even if you changed your character to be around 50 (which I wouldn't recommend), the sentence still doesn't make sense. Immediately after the Falklands War was over, he was sent to Afghanistan? Strange, considering the conflicts were about a quarter of a century apart. Either your guy can see the future (doubtful), his leaders can see the future (also doubtful), he stayed in the Falklands for 25 years (possible, but unlikely considering his character, and maximum posting in the Falklands is around 4 months), or... well.
I'm not trying to be patronising. But please make sure you know what you're talking about when you reference historical events.
"I fought on the front lines of Falklands war and after that I was deployed to Afghanistan where I stayed for 10 years I think."
That's physically impossible, considering your guy is 31; I went back and checked. There's two main mistakes here; number one is that if your guy was 31, he was born 2 years after the Falklands War had ended. So, yeah, that's a pretty major thing. Number two is that even if you changed your character to be around 50 (which I wouldn't recommend), the sentence still doesn't make sense. Immediately after the Falklands War was over, he was sent to Afghanistan? Strange, considering the conflicts were about a quarter of a century apart. Either your guy can see the future (doubtful), his leaders can see the future (also doubtful), he stayed in the Falklands for 25 years (possible, but unlikely considering his character, and maximum posting in the Falklands is around 4 months), or... well.
I'm not trying to be patronising. But please make sure you know what you're talking about when you reference historical events.