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  1. SavageJP

    Blackblood

    1 FIVE YEARS LATER; 4E 195 Torvald sat at a hard oak desk, staring out the window with a look of contemplation and scorn. Outside, a light snow is tossed and thrown violently by the wind as snowy sabre cats stalked their prey in the distance. High in the mountains of a desolate part of...
  2. SavageJP

    Blackblood

    Prologue 4E 190 The steel tipped arrow flew though the night, striking the unwary beast in its heart. Its knees buckled, and the forest stood still. The gentle sound of twigs snapping and leaves rustling broke the silence, and a large, burly figure appeared over the elk and withdrew the...
  3. SavageJP

    Blackblood

    Authors Notes ·This story will not have spoilers for TES:V, but will have numerous references and connections that you’ll understand if you've played through certain questlines. ·I’m in the middle of writing this, and I wanted to get a little bit further through the story before I posted this...
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    A couple of questions

    Ohhhhhhh, I see it now. Thanks a lot. I guess when I looked at the link on my iPhone, it registered that it was a Mac device and it didn't show the option on mobile. Gracias, I might give the trial a shot :D
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    A couple of questions

    Wow, Scrivener looks really awesome. Too bad it's just for Mac. Is there any Windows equivalent?
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    A couple of questions

    Hm, no I don't. Why's that?
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    A couple of questions

    Ahh, milk drinker. Thanks imagine, I forgot about that one! I'm really considering posting my story soon, I just want to get maybe one more chapter ahead, and maybeeee have someone read my current chapters for edits before I post. But idk, I don't want someone having to read every little...
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    A couple of questions

    Ohh I know, it just gave me a mental image of an overweight dragonborn sitting on a recliner, yelling at Aela. Then her responding by shooting him with an arrow. In the knee.:Dragonborn:
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    A couple of questions

    Hm. I like the Ysmir's beard one, I might use that somewhere in the storyline. But that's how I kinda felt about the F word, it just seems out of context, but I wanted to use it in the sense of "don't fl*ff with us", but I'm still unsure how it would sound in the context of skyrim. "Aye yo...
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    A couple of questions

    Indeed, I've used the "What in Oblivion" before. Along with comments like, by the gods, or by the nine. I was just trying to keep the story somewhat clean, but with the nature of the story and the characters in it, I feel like it's unavoidable, and sometimes, the F word just fits really well...
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    Nordic carved armor should of been the companions gear.

    Hm. I found wolf armor to be pretty fitting consider they were werewolves and all. And the nordic carved armor isss a bear. I think it sorta gave the companions a unique set which was nice, and it also made it a bit more rare. You can get wolf armor pretty early on in the game, fitting its armor...
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    A couple of questions

    Alrighty, I'm finally caught up editing in my first few chapters to where I'm actually writing new stuff everyday. :D Another question about language, and I'm not sure if it's already in a thread somewhere, but. What curse words should be used in a Skyrim fan fiction in your opinions? Like...
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    A couple of questions

    Alright, since you guys understand basically what my prologue entails, does this sound good for a summary. (Like a 'back cover of the book' kinda thing to place before the prologue) "Torvald, a Nord huntsman, and ex-Legion soldier, left fatherless in the world, roams the tundra of Skyrim...
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    A couple of questions

    I've been trying my best to work on an outline, and I've pretty much got the main plotline and key points figured out, I'm just trying to figure stuff out to fill in the gaps.
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    A couple of questions

    Thank you so much, really. Honestly, with the spelling of Khajiit, I would have never noticed it, and that's a really embarrassing mistake haha. I've noticed the same thing with the name-calling, I feel it makes the dialogue seem forced, and I've been trying to go back and change it lately. I...
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